“Я намерен победить на этот раз”/ I am going to win today

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Делюсь моей новой песней, которая называется “Я намерен победить на этот раз”/ I am going to win today Это пока рабочий вариант, но уж хочется получить какие нибудь рецензии и комментарии заранее. Спасибо Вам заранее.

Музыка: Дмитрий Тодоров
Слова: Ульяна Лапко
Аранжировка: Владимир Котов
Исполняет: Латиша


I am going to win today

Sun is knocking on the door
It’s painting the floor,
Painting my hair, my face, my pillow
It tingles my nose like a fairy ghost
And I open my eyes, I open the window
And everything’s new
Washed with morning dew
The sky is so bright
And birds are calling me
No time to be lazy
When the world is so dazzling
So I’m ready to start my day

River streams and,
Fishes are swirling in the ocean
Ships are sailing across the sea
Life is moving by the motion
Can’t you see?
You move, you try, you act, you hurry
And one day dreams become truth
See everything that is good
Depends on what we do.

My goal is so high
Like the sun in the sky
It’s like you’re climbing a mountain
But that does challenge me
With every mistake that I ever make
I learn I’m getting closer to my cherished dream
And even sometimes
When tears cover my eyes
I know clouds and rain will not stay everyday,
No insult, no blame
I’m playing my game and I am going to win today.